There are issues at every level here. D: pronunciation of the words "appetite" and deficate. Also delivery is extremely hesitant and choppy.
LU: "...professor explains by telling elephant, which is keystone..." Should be ...professor explains by talking about the elephant, which is a keystone..." Also, ..."elephant have prodigious appetite..." And..."The elephant has a prodigious appetite..."
TD: This is greatly affected by the lack of language
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There are issues at every level here.
D: pronunciation of the words "appetite" and deficate. Also delivery is extremely hesitant and choppy.
LU: "...professor explains by telling elephant, which is keystone..." Should be ...professor explains by talking about the elephant, which is a keystone..." Also, ..."elephant have prodigious appetite..." And..."The elephant has a prodigious appetite..."
TD: This is greatly affected by the lack of language
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